導語：奧數網給同學們匯總了小學英語作文范文及點評，希望同學們的英語學習有所幫助。以下為范文原文：

　　I love clean thing, it sounds good for me. But the thing is that I can’t bear the dirty environment around me, I am very picky about the environment. I need to make some change, I must get used to the normal situation. So I learn to wash the dirty clothes and do some dirty work. It is hard for me but I start to get over my weakness.

　　我喜歡干凈的東西,這對我來說似乎是好事。但問題是,我不能忍受我周圍的環境是臟的,我很挑剔環境。我需要做出一些改變,我必須習慣正常的情況。所以我學著去洗臟衣服,干一些骯的活。這對我來說是困難的,但我開始克服我的弱點。